Black Rose
September 22nd, 2010 § 38 Comments
Red roses are indeed, romantic,
White roses are just plain
This story is for the cynic,
Just read and don’t complain.
There’s something I want to tell you
From deep deep inside my heart
Life always has a good view
Especially when you see the colors and its hue.
I look at the stars that twinkle,
While I felt some sprinkle,
I’m dreaming of you to be with me
Though I know it will never be.
As I hold the black rose
And smell the scent that arose
This is indeed, romantic,
I really am one kind of quixotic.
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Sorry for this lame poem. :-]
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black rose,
a unique take,
romantic indeed…
beautiful poem!
Thank you Jingle!
have fun!
Thanks. You too!
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Love this part:
“I look at the stars that twinkle,
While I felt some sprinkle”
I like the idea of stars twinkling and sprinkling. Great visual image in my mind.
Thank you!
And thanks for dropping by…
Wonderfully written, great words:D
Good effort. Roses, indeed, have different meanings.
Hey, thanks to the two of you!
the poem ain’t lame.. it gives some different perspective of romance to think of too
well written..!
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Aww… Thank you! I feel so glad that some appreciates my work. God bless you!
ah but you are one of a kind…
Thanks, brian! :]
I enjoyed reading it again and again thought of Robert Frost Poem about roses…
Its a nice one…
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Om Namah Shivaya
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Aww… Thank you Shashi! I’m glad you enjoyed it.
With the broken rythm of mental thought. And a lovely title.
Nice job.
Ooohh… Thanks! :-]
I would hardly call this lame, but then I am a cynic
The romantics can categorize this poem to “love”, but the cynics will categorize this to “tragedy”.
Thanks for thinking it isn’t lame! :-] Have a nice day!
Great style, and really cool poem.
I enjoyed this
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Thank you Kiera! :-]
A Black Rose is a lovely one to see and I enjoyed reading here.. Good Poem..
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–Someone Is Special–
Thank you! :-]
Have a nice day!
black rose is most special i hear .. i infact need to be proposed with set of black roses i have decided .. this was not lame !! not for me at least
It’s a good feeling to know that people appreciate your work and thinks that it isn’t lame at all though you feel it was… Thank you! :-]
I really liked how you brought up more commonly liked roses – red or white – and then brought up the not commonly liked Black Rose. Most people would simply go with what most others like,.
Thanks! :-]
Through the darkness of chaos
the black rose rose alone
and remained misunderstood.
Cool theme, Inelle.
Nice to meet you! Peace, UT
Thanks! And thank you for dropping by… Nice to meet you, too.
please visit poets back,
thanks for the participation…
Happy Monday!
Sure thing!
I’ll find time.
Have a great day!
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link in 3 old poems, make us happy and make yourself happy too….
Black always brings mysterious kind of feel.
Love is one of mysterious thing in the world.
Black rose and love. Such a nice combo. ^^
Hey, thanks!
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love it.
“I’m dreaming of you to be with me
Though I know it will never be.”
love it love it love it
waiting for your other beautiful poems.
keep writing